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A Summer's Night
Author: channi[S]
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(Added on Jul 5, 2002)
(This month 48132 readers) (Total 57639 readers) |
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Master uses His slave hard on a hot summer's night. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
PetJulie
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Sep 28, 2008 |
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I enjoyed the pool scene and that the whole thing was wrapped up at the end. Thanks for the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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I found this to be a good read, although brief. Although I'm not one who capitalizes pronouns associated with the Dom/Master of the story, I understand where the author is coming from and wasn't bit distracted by it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jul 8, 2002 |
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I was curious to see how a very brief story could get such extremely high marks. I am now completely befuddled. First of all the author wouldn't recognize a sentence if it bit him or her on the posterior. Secondly what's with the capitalizing of every reference to this wonderful soul mate? Finally what is so novel or exciting or technically meritorious about this medium effort? In this context medium means neither rare nor well done! (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
dragonsslut
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Jul 6, 2002 |
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Dear channi,
Though i have never met you, your words melt my slave soul, oh heavens how descriptive you can be makes me just want to jump to Masters lap, Please continue to add more of your stories if you have them something nice and to the point to read, i wish you well.
dragonsslut{C} (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
wander[SPy]
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Jul 6, 2002 |
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*Uses His slave hard* is an understatement! This story is great. channi hits the mark of excellence in my book with this story of need, passion,and surrender. Way to go! (10/10)
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