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The Box
Author: Annie Crumb
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(Added on Aug 2, 2002)
(This month 51249 readers) (Total 66164 readers) |
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It is a short story of a girl lives as a slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
slv4u33
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Feb 12, 2010 |
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Great story line can easily see myself in that scenario in reality. Envied the slave wishing it was me (9/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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not much better then your other post (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
freefall
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Aug 5, 2002 |
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Is this a story about torture, or is the story itself a form of torture? I always avoid stories writen in the 2nd person, and I'm sure many others do to. This author suckers us in, then inexplicably switches over to that low form of storytelling. I can usually read through most gramatical "static", but I didn't bother finishing this turkey. I could tell it was heading for a "big bang" ending (somebody cums, story's over) . I'd like to tell the author to "try again", but the prospect of reading another one of these makes me say "give it up". (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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This story is no better than Pagan's. Lousy grammar makes it almost unreadable.
So, Kayce signs him/herself off as Pagan! Surely that's not possible, because Kayce has written high-rated reviews to Pagan's stories. :) (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marcus
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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If drake had read further he would have been able to enjoy the 'seamless' change of reference from 3rd person to 2nd person. With more care and attention the writer could improve her ratings. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
kayce
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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Don`t worry about ass-holes like Marcus and Drake they have a problem writting their name,they should get a life and you just enjoy doing what your doing,you wont find their name on an authors list,just enjoy what the other 4,500 have. PAGAN (7/10)
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- Replied by:
kayce
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2002)
- Yes I am involved with Pagan and this is my way of getting at the small click on this site that knock anybody just because they won`t write how they want it.Why not post one of your`s so we can all look on in ? Nice to see more than 7,000 in three days.
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drake7
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Aug 3, 2002 |
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Wasn't able to read past the first few paragraphs. Poor writing kills a story for me. At least try to make a new paragraph when you have a new speaker. (1/10)
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