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My Name Is On Bathroom Stalls
Author: Shadow
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(Added on Nov 2, 2002)
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Very XXX rated poem detailing a sluts desire to serve men in every disgusting way. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ethics
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Nov 3, 2002 |
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I actually found the verse extremely well written, even though it is in an older, somewhat uncommon style. I don't know wether it was intentianal, but the poem meter leaves me think of "the night before christmas"... and at the perfect time of year! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Marion
(Edit) (Nov 4, 2002)
- Thanks for the kind review. I too found myself thinking the poem sounded a little like the night before Christmas. Thought of changing it, but the story kept pumping through my brain, so I kept typing.
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Nov 3, 2002 |
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I liked the poem and I would have given it a higher rating, but I found the rhyming verse a little unnatural to try and follow. Nothing against the author or the body of the work, just personal prefernce of mine. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Marion
(Edit) (Nov 4, 2002)
- Dear Tourguide,
Appreciated your thoughts. To me it was the essense of the story rather than the rhyme or the style. It kept coming, so I kept typing. Thanks!
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