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It Started In The Hotel Room Author: zone
(Added on Dec 22, 2002) (This month 56964 readers) (Total 73200 readers)
She is in a hotel room and someone opens the door and in walks a stranger.... a stranger set to train you to be his.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Breathless (Edit) Rating: Oct 14, 2005
There is not enough character development for me to care about any of these people. I don't find the master sexually arousing at all (as I would for most stories of this type), and I found the main character's inability to cum to be unlikely.
I notice now that this is an older story - which is just as well since I have no desire to read any additional chapters of it. (4/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Oct 14, 2005
add more chapters so i can adjust me review (8/10)

Reviewer: hels (Edit) Rating: Mar 24, 2005
Really enjoyed this and was disappointed that it hadn't been continued, such good characters with so much moe to explore. (9/10)

Reviewer: rcb (Edit) Rating: Apr 6, 2003
Basic premise is fine,but needs work with sentence structure and spelling. Keep trying. (5/10)

Reviewer: CoffinNail (Edit) Rating: Dec 29, 2002
Interesting idea, but the writing is so plodding, the descriptions so lacking that it's tough to get much enjoyment here. Could really benefit from some spicing up.
--CN (5/10)

Reviewer: OneHotThing4All (Edit) Rating: Dec 27, 2002
The woman's PoV is great. Well written. (9/10)

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