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Kevin Butler
Author: mannapper
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(Added on Jan 11, 2003)
(This month 50360 readers) (Total 60666 readers) |
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Three bikini clad black women kidnap Kevin from the 7-11 where he works. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jul 13, 2003 |
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a good start, would love to see a continuation (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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I'm always curious to read a story with one low rating and one high. Although the spelling and grammar is acceptable, I find nothing in this very short story to recommend. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Jan 18, 2003 |
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Well written, but if the kinky content you are looking for is like a shot of whisky, this story is more like a wine cooler. Perhaps i've been reading these stories too long, but no shock value here. I suspect this would get you excited if you were an 18 year old kid working in a video store, that's never been laid. Writing = good, Content = lacking/too vanilla (5/10)
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- Replied by:
ootwee
(Edit) (Jan 18, 2003)
- Precisely, vanilla. Mmmmh !
18 and never been laid, and now this ! Mmmh. ;-)
I just want to say that there is no arguing about the flavor a reader likes.
I'm curious, honestly, how you would change the story more to your liking ? Where does it need more shock value ?
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| Reviewer:
ootwee
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Jan 13, 2003 |
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Refreshing to read this new edition by mannapper !
How can we encourage the author more than by rating it 'excellent' ?
This type of fantasy is not often encountered, unfortunately. (10/10)
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