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Pleasing Punishment
Author: Mia
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(Added on Jan 14, 2003)
(This month 54111 readers) (Total 67030 readers) |
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Mia isn't a very subbish sub and her Master decides it's time for her to make a decision either she is a sub or she's not. He uses a pretty little blonde in front of her to make his point. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 9, 2005 |
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not a bit little story, nice change from what i have been reading (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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Not a bad writer but definitely a story in search of an ending. The writing could use a little bit of an edge, not much fizz to it. I can't really tell whether the protagonist really seeks the dark side or not. This story reads as though the author is ambivalent about what they are writing about. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
sifuchar
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Jan 15, 2003 |
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Good beginning, looking forward to reading more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Swashbuckler
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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I thought this was an intense beginning. Can't wait to see where this is going to lead. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Firepager
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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this is a fair start to this story. wonder which direction it will lead (6/10)
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