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Maria
Author: Joe K
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(Added on May 14, 2003)
(This month 79771 readers) (Total 118995 readers) |
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A young woman is subjected to two sessions of torture and interrogation by her captors. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Mar 23, 2007 |
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A fun interrogation story which, as some of the other reviewers have noted, is more descriptive and passionless than usual, but still works reasonably well. (7/10)
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headhunter
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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Oh, yes! I liked the second session more than the first. (8/10)
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mkemse
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May 11, 2004 |
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was a very good read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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A rock has more emotion than this story.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 23, 2004 |
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An intense torture scene, and well written. Like the other reviewers, I would have liked it better if you had gotten down to the actual sex, but here the intent was obviously to shock, not turn on, and it worked well at that level. (8/10)
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ltlmisst
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May 20, 2003 |
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Great stroke story! Not much of a plot but some great heavy torture, but lack of same does not detract from this writing. Hope you keep making story submissions to this site Joe K. (7/10)
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tsosie
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May 18, 2003 |
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Although not a story persay, I do think it was a good read for the things that happen, not for why they happen. For those with imagination, it allows you to put any face you want on any of the people, letting your imagination personalize it for you. Good job. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 17, 2003 |
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This is a good piece of 'stroke' fiction. As the other reviewers have mentioned, it is a scene, rather than a story, but that's really what I look for in a jerk-off piece. Getting to know and understand characters can sometimes get in the way of getting off. And the work was clearly labeled "torture" and "heavy", which seems to me to be warning enough. (8/10)
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OneHotThing4All
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May 17, 2003 |
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Pure sadism with no releaving sex. This has no redeaming erotic content or other redeaming characteristics. (4/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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May 17, 2003 |
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This is very capably written, I think, and shows that the author has considerable talent and has worked hard to produce an intense story. But to create a really first-rate story, one needs better characterization, motivation and context. The author has shown us very well that he knows 'how' to write; in his next attempt I hope he gives more consideration to 'what' to write. Without the three qualities mentioned above, any story, no matter how intense and carefully crafted, will lack both personality and eroticism. IMO. But please try again -- what you did well here, you did very well indeed. (7/10)
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don11
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May 16, 2003 |
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Well written but deeply unpleasant. (5/10)
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Powerone
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May 15, 2003 |
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You tease at them going to rape her, but then you don't. Not sure why she is beging tortured. You need to put a story aroung the torture scenes. (6/10)
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Equalizer
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May 15, 2003 |
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Competent certainly, but lacked depth and originality. (6/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 15, 2003 |
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This is a very well written and quite exciting piece but it is a description of a bdsm scene rather than a story - everything occurs without being in any context. Nice work, all the same. (7/10)
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