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The Ride
Author: Paul T
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(Added on Jan 5, 2001)
(This month 18986 readers) (Total 50033 readers) |
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Disobedient slave must ride the Wooden Pony as punishment. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 23, 2005 |
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love wooden horses in stories (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Story was trite, but still... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
williampeter
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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I liked it unique subject first time I have read about riding the horse you could almost feel it (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Swashbuckler
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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The scene is great, the punishment is good, if comon. My only detraction from it is the length. There needs to be more developement here and a little more stimulation to the plot would be nice. Both of those are really one thing, need more story here. Great image though. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
willdo
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Jun 6, 2001 |
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Nice tale, quite plausable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Norbert |
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Mar 24, 2001 |
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Very good suspence (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
fyrekittyn |
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Mar 23, 2001 |
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Very nice scene! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
James |
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Feb 4, 2001 |
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I agree with hyphen 666. This has been done many times. The author has potential. The Master should have added to her torment before and during the actual riding. More pain less talk. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Jan 9, 2001 |
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If I've read this once, I've read its type a dozen times. This type of master-slave story is boring in the extreme. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Jan 7, 2001 |
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great scene, but not much ofa story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
L. M. |
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Jan 7, 2001 |
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Very nice story. Very descriptive and explicit. I like the way the author describes the torment. I do hope to see more stories from the author! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ramster |
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Jan 6, 2001 |
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Fun story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JustAReader |
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Jan 6, 2001 |
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This is a fantastic story. Its about a voluntary slave being punished by her master. The events are very well described. No obvioõs spelling or grammar mistakes. Only complaint: Too short. Perhaps the author would write a prequel and a few sequels. At any rate, I hope the author becomes a regular contributor. (10/10)
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