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Out of the Frying Pan, into the Fire
Author: Musker
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(Added on Jun 10, 2003)
(This month 156559 readers) (Total 208322 readers) |
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A young female executive assistant has boyfriend problems. Her lady boss has a plan to get ride of him. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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I just loved it, with all the little flaws it may have.
JJ (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Interesting idea but just too unbelievable. I understand why Beth went along in the beginning. But then when Katherine suggested moving in together or at the very latest when she suggested the s/m part any normal person would at least have checked the alternatives.
And since there are stalking laws she had quite a few alternatives. Or how about liking the idea to pretend to with someone else but since she is straight how about a hmmm, I don't know, maybe a man? Or getting a stronger (boy)friend to beat the creep up? Or getting a taser and doing it herself? Or at least talking with another friend about the problem? There are so many alternatives that going along like this is hardly believable if she had been a Bimbo but a highly intelligent young woman? Nope. Don't believe it. The story also lacked in sex, as in there was almost none.
With all the flaws of the story I still enjoyed some of it and especially the end when she doesn't enjoy it like in a lot of other cliche stories but thinks about revenge. That would be interesting. Her getting revenge on someone who loves her. (6/10)
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rilawild
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Aug 1, 2005 |
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This is one of my favourite stories of all time. It is an original and very erotic story. I particularly loved the final party. More please! (10/10)
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Hume
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Dec 14, 2004 |
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Incredible story. 4 and 5 chapter are not so good, but the rest... Wow!
I thought it was too long when I began to read it, but now I think it is short. Itīs the best F/F domination story I've ever read. Please more! (10/10)
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mkemse
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May 1, 2004 |
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great read, great story, hope to see more (10/10)
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MISTRESS JNAN
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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THANKS TO, D. IN DALLAS, FOR ENCOURAGING ME TO READ THIS STORY. (7/10)
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julise
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Sep 7, 2003 |
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This is a very good story. I think that the first few chapters and the last two chapters were the best. I think that Curtis was right that 4 and 5 were not the best chapters, but often a few chapters suffer in a serial story. I am forgiving of this because the rest of the story is so good. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 7, 2003 |
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Quite an enjoyable story and premise. Very original and exciting story. We couldn't wait to see where it all led to. Maybe a sequal in the works? We hope so. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 18, 2003 |
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I actually was leaning toward a '4' for this story. The first three chapters were quite good, but four and five (the last I could force myself to read), had more and more mis-spellings and bad grammar. Also, the story became rapidly more unbelievable and hard to swallow. Finally, I gave up. (5/10)
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S_Couture
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Jun 12, 2003 |
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It doesn't get any better than this. Original, erotic, and disturbing. I loved it. (10/10)
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ms_2b_used
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Jun 12, 2003 |
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Truly a work of art! I was totally mesmerized by the entire scenario and actually came to immensely envy Beths' descent into total slavery!
I keep praying that there will be more F/F D/s stories but continue to be disillusioned often due to 90% of the new stories being 'Male' oriented!
I hope that Anne will continue her masterful expertise in the production of further similiar stories and possibly the continualtion of this one!
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien)
binkyboom@hotmail.com (10/10)
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BlackRad!sh
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Jun 11, 2003 |
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Please write more! As long as this story is, I felt, at the end, that the tale had only just begun. (9/10)
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