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In Our Private Pool Author: ElectricGeisha
(Added on Jun 24, 2003) (This month 49300 readers) (Total 54572 readers)
For one night only, a slave and her Master get to use a private swimming pool to fulfil their fantasy.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: Jun 29, 2003
In the Forum, I wrote that the dreaded triumvirate of romantic/consensual/light seemed to be the code for "badly written". Thank goodness, that's not the case here, though it was too short. (7/10)

Reviewer: don11 (Edit) Rating: Jun 27, 2003
Highly competent.
Shows the positive side ... a good thing. (8/10)
Replied by: ElectricGeisha (Edit) (Jun 28, 2003)
Thanks honey :)

Reviewer: Barbara Anne (Edit) Rating: Jun 27, 2003
This erotic scene was well written and deserves the high marks that it had received from earlier readers. (9/10)
Replied by: ElectricGeisha (Edit) (Jun 28, 2003)
Hey sweetheart,
Thanks for positive review. Am very encouraged to see readers enjoy it :) Take care and have fun!

Reviewer: Nitrofox (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2003
This is a great story. The idea is fantastic, and the actions are well described. I like the idea of a romantic Master-Slave relationship, and this accentuates such an idea well. The story is written well, there being no outstanding errors. My only complaint was that it was too short. This is truly a gem. (9/10)

Reviewer: Powerone (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2003
Excellent Master/Slave story. Great location for the sex. Good dialogue, great sex. (9/10)

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