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For the Birds
Author: Miss Suki
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(Added on Jul 17, 2003)
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A slave girl is used up, broken, and fed to the birds. |
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Nov 25, 2005 |
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Some more description would have been nice. I can see some of the erotic potential to this piece. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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The writing is fairly good but the story falls short and very abrupt. There is also something depressing about this one. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jul 17, 2003 |
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I understand don11's problem with this piece. However, taken simply as a concise description of somebody's erotic fantasy it has some merit. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jul 17, 2003 |
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Deeply unpleasant (4/10)
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