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Gosh!
Author: Sir_Nathan
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(Added on Jul 31, 2003)
(This month 54345 readers) (Total 80663 readers) |
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Completely unrealistic, stupid, and naive girl is used and abused. And yes, it's just a bit of fun. Fiction right. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Nuditarian
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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A very fun read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Sep 21, 2003 |
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i love it - great description - fits appropriately, and i have to say im glad you had mercy for poor stupid slut! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Sep 7, 2003 |
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The story was over the top as described. The story seemed fragmented and not much transition between the sections. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ms_2b_used
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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In my opinion, this is by far one of the dullest, and least sexually oriented stories it was ever my misfortune to waste time reading! PURE TRASH!!!!! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Aug 3, 2003)
- Thankyou for your wonderful review... can't help wondering if it was your cat I ran over!
Nathan
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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This is my kind of story, totally unbelievable and completely over the top. The stereotypical characters are just perfect for this insane romp into the stranger corners of the author's mind. Unfortunately the ridiculous chapter construction (author and webmaster are equally to blame) has limited my ability to enjoy this story to the fullest, thus lowering my rating. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 2, 2003 |
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A bit slow moving, but maybe it was just too many small chapter breaks. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir_Nathan
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2003)
- Thankyou for your repply Emily and yes you are quite right. This story was submitted to this site as one, albeit fairly large, document. The webmaster chose to break it up into each chapter, some of which are very small. Apologies.
Nathan
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