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Dana's Revenge
Author: Tweak
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(Added on Aug 20, 2003)
(This month 70019 readers) (Total 107887 readers) |
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Dana is a jilted girlfriend who teaches her ex-boyfriend that it doesn't pay to make her mad by letting him see what life as a girl in a chastity belt is like. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Apr 20, 2007 |
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Yawn. The old fairytale of the unbreakable chastity belt. Should come with a fantasy label. And even if it was unbreakable there is no lock that can't be picked. And even if it was unpickable why can't he exactly go to the cops? He just has to take a taperecorder to the 1st meeting in the restaurant and he has all the evidence needed. Or simply take her and torture her until she gives up the key?
But noo he doesn't even try to get out. Sorry but that's lame.
Also there is practically no sex in the story, just forced feminization and some humiliation.
And how Dana comes to the conclusion that he has led her on for 2 years and he doesn't protest is just strange. I mean it should be clear to any sane person that even if he has been thinking about splitting up for some time it can't have been from day one.
And if she is aware of her ticking clock and wants to land a man, how does she do it if she is messing with him all the time?
To sum it up, unrealistic props, unbelievable characters, no sex. At least spelling and grammar are OK otherwise I would have given an even lower score. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 22, 2005 |
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Not much into Femdom, but thhis was a god stroy, hope to continue along these lines in the future (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Sep 1, 2004 |
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Wonderfully wicked revenge story - great plotting and inventive scenes -- I can't wait to read how it all turns out. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
gnrjr
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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I enjoyed it a lot would like to see part II. The diaper idea was great (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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The story codes should have been done differently - it was all about transvestites and transgender, neither of which was mentioned. Readers into those kinks wouldn't find the story, readers looking for other things do find it.
I agree with trainmanretep - the story was longer than the concept seemed to support. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Aug 21, 2003 |
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over all a bit long got boring after awhile. maybe more physical torment or sexual teasing by Dana would have made it better (6/10)
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