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Author: Fidelis Blue
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(Added on Sep 13, 2003)
(This month 48599 readers) (Total 54497 readers) |
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A beautiful woman asks him to take pictures of her while she's tied up. His female assistant disapproves, but soon things have gone beyond his control. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jan 29, 2012 |
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I agree with norcod and Driscoll, this story could well do with a bit more "fleshing out". (8/10)
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gillian
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Dec 1, 2003 |
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good quality, enjoyable. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 16, 2003 |
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Huh. Again, technically proficient, but not hot. I'm glad the photographer got the picture, because I sure didn't. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
libco
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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Cute! And sexy of course. (8/10)
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Emily
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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A very nice, eloquent read! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Sep 19, 2003 |
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Very well told but, I agree, short and it begs for more content. I liked the character development, but that too promisses more than it delivers by the end. The author is very good with language and has a clean, comfortable style. The plot is interesting. It's just that it could be longer, more complex and thus more interesting. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 15, 2003 |
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Very good but too short. Interesting in plot although not extremely novel. Beginning of character development. Erotic development is blunted by shortness and lack of detail. The same amount of action could easily be accomodated in a piece three times as long. For an example see the superb "A Lesson in Manners" by this same author. (8/10)
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