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Lisa's Lesson
Author: fireball
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(Added on Sep 15, 2003)
(This month 89546 readers) (Total 138510 readers) |
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A pretty girl gets humiliated and degraded as punishment for the way she treated her tormentor. She won't make the same mistake again. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Great story, you can't go wrong with the subject line being humiliation degration ect.
Eevn tho it is a fantasy it has the reight components to make it work
great job (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Flying Dutchman
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Oct 12, 2005 |
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I like this. In line with my own thoughts and ideas.
Looking forward to reading more from this author (9/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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Well written strong stuff. (9/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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OK. But a little too cliche to really click. There should be a law maybe, that prohibits the use of the word SLUT more than a time or two per story? (7/10)
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frenchgus
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Nov 1, 2003 |
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please more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Sep 24, 2003 |
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It is a fairly well written story, however, there is no inclination as to what Lisa did to garner such a predicament. A flashback sequence at some point would be informative and creative. (7/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 21, 2003 |
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Good beginning. We look forward to more details to the characters in the future as the story develops further. (7/10)
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rcb
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Sep 20, 2003 |
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High Quality -- Content and storyline are solid (9/10)
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SMartie57
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Sep 20, 2003 |
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Very nice story, and a number of good ideas as to how Lisa is humiliated. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
wabbit
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Sep 19, 2003 |
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this is an early review of a story that is obviously still being worked on. Well written in the context of spelling, punctuation, sentence structure ect. However maybe a bit bland and no real creativity yet shown. Also, i must agree with another reviewer by saying there was a noticeable lack of character description. As further chapters come in, I will gladly revisit this review, for the potential for a very good story is here (7/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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This is a good story, and one that is remarkably free from error, but I think the author could have set his/her sights a little higher. I don't believe the man even has a name, much less a personality; he is just faceless vindictiveness. But aside from that the scene is described very nicely, although a little more tamely than I would have expected (8/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Sep 16, 2003 |
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Very well written and enjoyable. Please continue the tale. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 16, 2003 |
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A classic tale of abduction and sexual torture. Although this is not my favorite genre, I have to admit it is very well done, well written. (9/10)
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