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Another Day
Author: Wontworry
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(Added on Sep 24, 2003)
(This month 51188 readers) (Total 57690 readers) |
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What goes through a sub's mind when asked a simple question. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 16, 2006 |
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different but nice, an enjoyable read (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Jan 5, 2004 |
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I'm not sure about the style. I liked the thought processes, but too many full stops and there were many questions that were asked by the character, and these were with no question marks and still continued in and amongst the full stops.
The broken up writing does convey a nervousness, and the thought processes of Emma, however throughout the entire part, is a wee bit too much, making her appear like a nervous wreck.
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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I found the style of this writing a interesting and different. I also enjoyed the nervous, almost quivering way in which our heroine projects her thoughts onto the scene! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
wabbit
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Sep 27, 2003 |
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Although not long enough to be considered(or rated) as a real story, it was still a nice read, well written and beautifully thought out.A nice look into the mind of a submissive. Would like to see this author expand this creativity into a longer story some day. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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Very different story than the first one published by this author. A stream-of-consciousness like dive inside of a sub's mind. A very well written, romantic yet scary vignette written with conviction and passion. (9/10)
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