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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
robbieee
(Edit) |
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Jan 3, 2004 |
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please,,,,more!
thanks so much! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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This story has an interesting retrospective, almost cerebral approach to its somewhat isolated arena into the mind set of the dom/sub reality. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 12, 2003)
- Yes, I was trying to something a little different. Some people found the end spiled it for them, others thought it intriguing. It's something I had to try.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Oct 9, 2003 |
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And just when I thought there were only so many ways of doing 'it'...
Everyone is different, and everyone has different tastes. This story/chapter is very different, and I enjoyed it.
'I said.. I said.. I said...' Over and over again. This would usually seem monotonous, lacking in emotion, and simply scream amateur, but here I believe the author has used it to create a feeling of dominant harshness. Note too how the short sharpness of much of the dialog reinforces this.
This story has a chilling coldness about it that got this reader really hot. <br>Well done. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2003)
- I'm really glad you got the point, of the hardness and coldness, which I too thought was sexy!
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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I'm sorry but a disapointment. Head games are nice but this one goes a bit to far. Call it detumescent fiction or what. I know that during writing we all get down days but usually I throw out what I write on those occasions rather than submit it. Better to suffer privately and not publish. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
fidelis
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2003)
- If it's so bad it didn't rate publication, I'm surprised you give it 6/10!
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