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Justice
Author: FlogMaster
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(Added on Feb 9, 2001)
(This month 87067 readers) (Total 116219 readers) |
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Janey thought she got a nice job as a maid in her mistress's mansion. But she found her cruel mistress had other plan on her. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chuckneb
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Nov 24, 2004 |
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Review by Chuck D.
11/24/04
But for a few grammatical slips, I believe that this superb erotic narrative would have warranted a five-star rating. The brilliant plot of “Justice” amply compensates for these flaws.
The author shrewdly employs foreshadowing that arouses curiosity without revealing too much. The main character, a servant named Jane, at first thought that her mother, or one of her cousins, resembled her mistress. She later dismissed all such resemblances and left the reader clueless. Reversal in this plot adopts a “BDSM” meaning without abandoning its usual literary one. Here it also means role reversal where Mistress becomes servant, and vice versa. I find such creativity greatly beneficial to literary enrichment. “Justice” spares the reader the pain of reading gross obscenity, yet it is intensely erotic. Elegant descriptions of how the Mistress’ attractive contours moved while disciplining her servant, Jane, serve as a good example. Jane’s reaction to the lash is no less riveting. What a great piece of work, to say the least!
“Justice” emphasizes on female-female scenes, but it has a bit of everything for everyone. I find it both didactic and entertaining. If you are searching for intense erotic discipline without grotesque pornography, then “Justice” is on your side!
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Xavier |
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Mar 28, 2001 |
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Surprisingly well-written, with an actual plot. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Joe Stalin |
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Feb 14, 2001 |
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Kind of boring. I kept reading, but eventually lost interest before anything interesting happened. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
gwennie |
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Feb 10, 2001 |
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Jeez, this story is da bomb!! i loved it, it was so beautifully written! if anyone knows who this story was written by, please email me! i've got to know!
~gwennie (10/10)
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