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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
(Edit) |
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Nov 27, 2005 |
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Run on sentences, commas where they should not exist and no commas where they should are a prime example of the numerous grammatical errors that kept this story from having any sort of flow. This is to say that I back tracked numerous times to make certain I got the gist of many sentences. I might have managed to enjoy this story had these problems not been so common. As it was, I could not. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
tiffany love
(Edit) |
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Sep 20, 2005 |
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Superbe story. Even though the grammar could use some work, the story is great (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
(Edit) |
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Oct 11, 2003 |
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Has some potential but there are far too many spelling and grammatical errors. I wanted to like it but the language issues defeated me. (4/10)
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