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Sara
Author: XtremeInk
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(Added on Oct 14, 2003)
(This month 4 readers) (Total 31660 readers) |
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Sara is a teen girl who is dominated by her sister. Her sister is very kinky, very into pain and Sara loves all of it! But now there's a new playmate joining them... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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While well written, "Sara" is too much of a rushed rollercoaster ride, giving the reader no time to really enjoy what's being done to Sara, because, instead of being able to savour a nasty humiliation or exquisite torture, there's already some other sordid ordeal under way.
Having a thirteen year old calling a sixteen year old 'Mistress' is a tad tedious, especially coming from someone as inventive as Xtremeink.
Very good story, though it could have been 'better' should this speeding freight train have stopped in a few stations along the way to its terminus.
JJ (8/10)
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marisamiller
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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That box earns a ten by itself. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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what else can i say (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Oct 27, 2003 |
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Age issues aside, this was an incredibly hot story. I enjoyed the humiliation of it all. (8/10)
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Nebu
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Oct 19, 2003 |
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NICE! Not your average 'see what i can come up with'. Instead, nice storytelling! Wondering where this trio will go since each one combines so many curious interest... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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The lack of hygene is...stomach churning...but I have to agree about the author showing imagination. Some good, original ideas here. (9/10)
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Jacen
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Oct 17, 2003 |
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Despite a few things not being fully within my range of (admittedly odd and eclectic) tastes, I have no complaints about this story. Judging by the jump in quality from the author's first to second story, the 10th one should be superb. (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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The author certainly has lived up to her name. This little gem covers the waterfront with style and thoroughness. The characters are very well matched and the addition of Jane really kicked this story up at least a notch or so. I hope that we haven't seen the last of this very kinky trio. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
XtremeInk
(Edit) (Oct 15, 2003)
- Thanks for the glowing review :) There is indeed another story written and I've started a third - but don't know when I'll finish.
Oh - and I hope that this doesn't bother you, but I'm a male :)
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