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Donna Takes Charge
Author: The Qmoq
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(Added on Oct 21, 2003)
(This month 65743 readers) (Total 105613 readers) |
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An all-female romp, involving three nervous masochistic women inviting a new dominatrix into their house for the night... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Thorny
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Mar 17, 2007 |
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Really well-written, with witty dialogue and inventive tortures. The ending was very sweet too, not like the depressing "sold into slavery" endings you often see in stories of this kind. Kudos! (9/10)
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Alex Bragi
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Nov 5, 2006 |
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Just fabulous! A good entertaining, very well written read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 14, 2006 |
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Excellent story, great portrayal of the characters... well done Qmoq!
Though this story was posted over three years ago, I sincerely hope there's a continuation lurking round the corner...
JJ (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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Apr 6, 2005 |
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Wow! Wow! And did I say Wow!? What a fantastic story. I can't believe I overlooked this before. So many wonderful ideas. I do hope the author gets inspired to write about all of these characters again. Donna was especially intriguing, and I would love to hear the back story between her and Elouise. (9/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Apr 5, 2005 |
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Very good reading. Just enough excitement to keep it interesting, but not so gratuitously sexy that the story ceases to be suggestive, and becomes simply trashy. (8/10)
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longrover
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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I don't know how I missed this until now. Well written and great fun. (10/10)
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PNReader
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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This is a very well written story and I would love to see a sequel. (10/10)
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Taskmaster
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Dec 8, 2003 |
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Enjoyed the opening with the egg -- then the use of the choclate syrup -- a really fiendish idea with the 4-5-6-7 in the contract -- and that's how to use cold water. The Qmoq is an inventive writer with new ideas on the use of ordinary objects. In future chapters would like to see the girls split up and unsure as to what is happening to each other. Also liked the introduction of girl-girl scenarios forcing the roomates to rethink their relationships with each other in a lesbian involvement. (9/10)
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kittenfemme
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Nov 22, 2003 |
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WOW! I found this on jadrel's BDSM Shelf. I'm glad I did. Will it be continued? Please? *batting eyelashes* (10/10)
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fredjf1
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Oct 26, 2003 |
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Deserves a sequel (9/10)
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jadrel
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Oct 25, 2003 |
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Extremely enjoyable. Well written and good fun. Am most definatly looking forward to the next installment! (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Oct 24, 2003 |
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Very nice and fun story. Looking forward to seeing some more. (9/10)
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Moggy
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Oct 22, 2003 |
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Really good fun. Nice writing style and imagination, not unlike Richard Alexander.
I thought the ice scenes could have used some editing. That aside, I'm looking forward to more. RECOMMENDED! (9/10)
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oceanova1
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Oct 22, 2003 |
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This MUST be continued. Enough said. (8/10)
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