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Dance Author: Daphne
(Added on Dec 6, 2003) (This month 53677 readers) (Total 61758 readers)
A woman meets her Master for the first time unexpectedly....

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: deepbluemm (Edit) Rating: Apr 11, 2004
Excellent realism. Daphne writes just the way that I like it. Believable and dreamy! Well done! (9/10)

Reviewer: Cleo671 (Edit) Rating: Dec 12, 2003
I overlooked the 'H's.. wow, I like the way they interact, the way he talks to her had me hooked!
(8/10)

Reviewer: Alex Bragi (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2003
Daphne, Daphne, Daphne, this good, very good idea. Lovely clear crisp descriptions, believable dialog, and hotter than hot action! Can I really ask for more? Sure I can - more pulleez!
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I thought the ellipsises may have been a little over done, they should really only be used where words are missing, and unfortunately about two thirds down you changed tenses.
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“She sees the flash of something ...” - Your story begins in past but swaps here to present, and then back again to past a few paragraphs down. It’s a very good read, so how about correcting this little hiccup? (8/10)
Replied by: Daphne (Edit) (Dec 22, 2003)
You're right Alex...I hadn't noticed that....thank you...i will definately be more careful in future....still..very glad you enjoyed it...

Reviewer: Faibhar (Edit) Rating: Dec 7, 2003
Forget about a sash, cutlass, clammy viscous (sic) grip, and repeated use of the capital "H"ss, this story is riveting in its own way. Well written with a unique POV, "Dance" provides vivid characters in an entertaining setting. (8/10)
Replied by: Daphne (Edit) (Dec 7, 2003)
Faibhar..so glad you enjoyed it...am paying closer attention to the "H"s.....chapter two is now submitted and hopefully added soon
Daphne

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