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Squeens
Author: Strinian
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 50634 readers) (Total 58822 readers) |
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In the year 2050 the all-female government is taking steps to eradicate various forms of male crime. The Department of Behaviour Correction has begun training Squeens, or smother queens, to punish errant men by humiliating them and sitting on their faces. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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The title is a grabber and the material is sufficiently kinky to hold ones attention. Smothering is a niche fetish that appears to be growing in popularity, and this story seems to be trying to cover the subject,(pardon the pun )in great detail. The background development certainly passes muster, the writing is clear and the author obviously understands the importance of simple declarative sentences, a big plus. I must however argue that this imagined punishment would probably not work on the cast of characters that populate this story. In fact one of the higher compliments that a well constructed woman receives these days is the statement that "She can sit on my face anytime." Despite this quibble, I am certainly looking forward to more of the same from the author. (8/10)
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