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She Likes It
Author: Bill Anderson
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(Added on Dec 16, 2003)
(This month 52391 readers) (Total 64698 readers) |
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A Dom steps in to help a sub who can't get what she needs at home. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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not on thesame scaleas youro therstory but still real good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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High quality writing, good use of language. Probably not the most original of tales, but a good telling, and well worth reading. Certainly worth a higher rating. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
DomMaster
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May 14, 2004 |
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While the dialog is good, there are no surprises. With the vast amount of material on this site, and others like it, it is truley difficult to be original. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 5, 2004 |
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I agree with the comments of the previous two reviewers, but come to a different conclusion. If 'the same old thing' is written in a better way, that deserves some recognition. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Dec 18, 2003 |
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Well written, especially compared to the average story on this site. Pity the ambitions of the author were not higher since the storyline and characters seem to be straight out of "BDSM for dummies" handbook. This way, the solid language and clean, crisp writing style have to (and manage to a good extent) make up for the lack of any challenging content. Hopefully, the author was just testing his muscles and next time goes for something deeper and bigger. (6/10)
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lex ludite
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Dec 17, 2003 |
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What can one say about this little effort? The writing style is fine, the editing is acceptable, the ending is not unexpected for this kind of short story and the two main characters play their parts almost by rote. There is some heat, but it's certainly not over the top. All this said, this story has been told, retold and told again. This lacks any hint of originality or novelty, sort of dominance by the numbers. I would have preferred a more risky approach in this story, even if it failed. This is just average, and only tells me that the author has the proper tools to write but has not yet chosen a challenging subject. I would like to see him step up to the plate and take some real cuts the next time round. (4/10)
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