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Revenge on a Tranny
Author: BigBadDyke
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(Added on Jan 18, 2004)
(This month 54234 readers) (Total 70144 readers) |
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A transsexual with a dick makes the mistake of having an affair with my lover. This is not another cute transgender story. This is part one and as I enjoyed writing it, I will write several more installments in the near future. |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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May 30, 2007 |
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A new idea, lesbian vs. tranny. But apart from that not much good stuff here.
How did she get Julie to submit to her? With what blackmail? Why didn't Julie go back to Katie? Since they were both in love Katie would have taken her in.
How did Donna get all of Katie's friends out of the bar that night? Did she put a big sign up, "only enemies of Katie and Katie are welcome tonight" or did she wave her magic wand?
Why didn't Katie get away when they were in public? Come on, it was clear that she would live life in hell if she didn't. Just cry for help in the mall. You can't break anybody in just 3 or 4 days. Too many plot holes.
There's not one sex scene I find interesting but that may vary for others.
I find it strange that a member of a minority that is shunned for her sexuality could hate someone else so much just because of theirs. But that's human nature I guess but it turns me off.
Grammar and spelling are OK, the story is missing a M+/m code. (4/10)
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freshmanHell
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May 1, 2006 |
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i love this story for the sadistic tortures....
i really love it & i'll wait for the sequel....
cool.... (10/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Aug 12, 2004 |
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The idea of the story was great. The flow was a little rough but it flowed better toward the end of the story. I hope to see the sequel someday. (7/10)
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trainmanretep
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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concept of the story is great. The wriiting is a bit uneven. The story could use some polishing. However, please do try write a sequel. (5/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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This one has its moments. Lesbians versus transsexuals is a bit off the beaten path even for this site, so it gets high marks for originality. What passes for sex and the over the top violence is more than adequate. There is no way that the main character could be a member of the medical profession! I would have had another lesbian act in this capacity. The other characters range from being stereotypical to downright ugly. Proofing and editing could be improved, but it's not that bad. The writing style is undisciplined, almost personal in nature, which has both advantages and pitfalls. I'll probably peek in on this one later provided the tranny is still functioning as a human being, and not some symbol for the author's personal prejudices. (6/10)
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BlackRad!sh
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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I love this story for it's innovative plot and sadistic punishments. Please continue this tale!!! (10/10)
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