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Twilight Embrace
Author: Slydreamer
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(Added on Feb 16, 2004)
(This month 48830 readers) (Total 54497 readers) |
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A short story, originally written as a possible first chapter in a larger story for an anime based tentacle rape chat room. |
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| Reviewer:
willowspirit
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Aug 29, 2012 |
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Very well done! This has a really good background, with an interesting plot. The whole set-up is believable. I'd like to read much more of this adventure!
Some unnecessary repetitiveness in word choices, but it barely distracts from the story.
Two little typos.
" 'I know you're alien, and I know that your kind and mind [mine] don't think alike…' "
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"Gradually, the creature twisted her around so that she was lying one [on] her back, and the pace of the tentacle in her pussy began to pick up."
I noticed that there was little nipple or breast play, yet the descriptive image of the tight swimsuit on Amy's body lead me to believe the jikra may like breasts... or at the very least, the author wasn't about to ignore them.
I wonder if the jikra enjoy the sexual teasing of their "pets". Will there be any clit play? Toying with arousal and then denial?? (9/10)
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sinner's prayer
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Jul 24, 2012 |
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crazy awesome story plot...definitely original...The tentacle scene and the humor behind the treatment of humans was definitely reminiscing of human slave trade and treatment...I loved how you made the alien creature's ejaculation addictive. I know for sure that info will come into play later in the story, and I am looking forwad to hearing what else you come up with (9/10)
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sarakajira
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Dec 22, 2009 |
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nice! OMG i love tentacles! i wish Master could have this creature as Her pet to keep me in line!
More please! More! (9/10)
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Jacen
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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Sadly, this was cut short, and shows it. Expanding it would be highly recomended :) (8/10)
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