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Flesh, Blood, and Bone
Author: Morrighan
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(Added on Mar 21, 2004)
(This month 55373 readers) (Total 72156 readers) |
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Death comes to Rachel, and she embraces it willingly. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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Wow! As Fetish101 said below, the use of language in this story is simply exceptional, with breath-takingly beautiful imagery in nearly every paragraph. ///
This isn't really my genre (I was drawn to the story by the brief passage in the Forum) and it didn't really push my personal hot buttons, but even so I thought the story was steeped in a seductive eroticism all of its own. A few superfluous punctuation marks aside, this is as polished a story as I've seen here. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jones, Nikka
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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Beautiful imagery, yet it leaves a lot to the reader's imagination. Written for those with a specific fetish yet readable for any who enjoy carefully crafted scenes. Very Good! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Morrighan
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2004)
- Thank you very much for taking the time to review my story. Just so you know, there is also a thread in the forums where I've asked specific questions about the story--if you have time, I'd really appreciate it if you would look it over, and let me know if any of those points jumped out at you. If not, then this alone was more than sufficient. Thank you.
Morrighan
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| Reviewer:
fetish101
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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Very well written. The use of descriptive words leave most stories on this site far behind. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Well done. (10/10)
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