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Need and Redemption
Author: Karen Anne Mitchell
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(Added on Mar 25, 2004)
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On an another world, a desperate slave girl is forced to seek satisfaction for the needs her alien masters have created within her. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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An interesting idea and character, flawlessly written. Not a lot of action, though. (9/10)
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XtremeInk
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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I rarely rate something a 10. In fact, I don't even consider my own work a 10. This story, whoever, was really excellent. I'd love to see more from you! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Mar 26, 2004 |
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Welcome to this site Karen Anne Mitchell! Because of the high rating that this story had, before I read the story I checked to see if you had any previous postings on this site. I was suprised to see no previous postings. Then I read the story. You obviously must have perfected your craft elsewhere because you do not write like a novice. I cannot begin to describe how well written this story is.<br>Perhaps the ultimate compliment that can be rendered to this story is to note that Lord Douche has given a ten to a story that has no significant enema action and I have given a ten to a story that does not have graphic female corporal punishment. A pair of tens from senior reviewers for a story outside of their core kinks - now that requires good writing! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2004)
- It gets extra points because it's Sci-Fi :)
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| Reviewer:
Morrighan
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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The plot is solid and interesting, the inner conflict very well described. As an encounter, it's outstanding. As a longer work, more detail and explanation is needed; if this description will be coming in the next chapter, then I would be very interested in reading it. (9/10)
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longrover
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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Susan's decision to reject the group standard to embrace her own need, with all the ambivalence she fought, was well plotted and well written. (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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Excellent story! Apart from the wierd double-copy of the story, it's great! (10/10)
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