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Rancho Paloma Blanca Author: Estaban Bacca
(Added on Apr 15, 2004) (This month 81186 readers) (Total 148989 readers)
The adventures of an international slave trader. This segment set in Mexico and Guatemala. Opens with the capture of a mother and daughter who are on vacation in the Yucatan Penninsula. Relates their conditioning as slaves and their eventual sale to a wealthy client.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: littleslut (Edit) Rating: Jun 18, 2004
a wonderful story that just keeps getting better and better! (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jun 18, 2004
wish it could be rated higher, this is my type of story, and genere, hope there is much more to come (10/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 18, 2004)
Thank you for a kind review

Reviewer: EngineX (Edit) Rating: Jun 16, 2004
The latest segment about the 2nd capture is the best yet in this story. I like the attention paid to the details of the kidnap which adds a dimension of realism, anticipation and erotic tension which works very well... (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
Thank you for taking the time to comment on this story - E

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2004
Good story. We thought the pace was quite good, enough details without getting bogged down. We also enjoy the switching of the points of view. We look forward to the next segments. (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: MoMnDaD (Edit) Rating: May 15, 2004
We find this work extremely well paced. The action moves from one heroine to the other and back. We are looking forward to the next predicaments and indignities. (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: MicrowaveOven (Edit) Rating: May 15, 2004
Great storyline, though the story itself a bit too fastpaced for my liking. I'm looking forward to the next chapters in this story. (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (May 31, 2004)
Thank you for taking the time to review. I am glad you find the theme interesting.

Reviewer: Luzifer (Edit) Rating: May 13, 2004
great stuff!!
I really like it and am longing for further parts (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: Powerone (Edit) Rating: Apr 20, 2004
OK now, 1623 words is a chapter now. You managed to set up the characters, capture them, strip one of them in 1623 words. You should have them broken in, sold in another 1500 words.
(5/10)

Reviewer: Tom Wilson (Edit) Rating: Apr 19, 2004
Chapter one is a blistering start for this story. The author has his slave trader working slowly to condition his new aquisitions into slave life. I can't wait for chapter two. (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: peachers (Edit) Rating: Apr 16, 2004
GOOD BUT BELEIVE AS MOGGY POINTED OUT IN THIER REVIEW HURRIED
STILL I WILL BE KEPTING A LOOK OUT FOR MORE
GOOD JOB MORE PLEASE (7/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: Moggy (Edit) Rating: Apr 15, 2004
A good start, if rather short. I thought the writing was capable and engaging, but too hurried. This material could have easily been stretched to three times the length and still kept the reader's attention. (7/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
thank you for reviewing
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Jun 8, 2004)
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