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The Hemingway Dialogue Author: Natalie Nessus
(Added on Jun 1, 2004) (This month 50191 readers) (Total 58575 readers)
Two women, a winter Sunday in Paris, the conversation turns to Hemingway and a small wager.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 24, 2009
Did I say, poetry?
JJ (10/10)

Reviewer: Dürrer (Edit) Rating: Sep 27, 2004
(8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jun 8, 2004
:) (8/10)

Reviewer: soleil (Edit) Rating: Jun 5, 2004
The threads of subtle eroticism that weave through all of Natalie's works are often a welcome, refreshing change. I've been following Natalie Nessus' work for some years and, while this is very good, it was also written a couple of years ago. Natalie has certainly developed as a writer since then, as is evidenced by Sophia's Diary. (9/10)

Reviewer: Breannefun (Edit) Rating: Jun 4, 2004
I thought this story was light and entertaining, but lacked a lot in depth compared to the fluid writing style. I think the author is capable of a lot more in the area of detail and look forward to it. (8/10)

Reviewer: EstabanBacca (Edit) Rating: Jun 3, 2004
I enjoyed reading this piece.Your style is very fluid and the dialogue has a good rhythm. Your victim's character needs more deliniation. I would say that you are ready to try something a bit more intricate. (9/10)

Reviewer: C_Lakewood (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2004
Delightful and subtle. The punctuation could be improved, but the style is impeccable. (9/10)

Reviewer: Faibhar (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2004
Traffic outside of the Parisian apartment was muffled and that was good. This story reads well. Like a fine Sunday periodical offering the reaader his or her choice of interest. The story's wager may be small, but the reader's dividends large. (8/10)

Reviewer: Roamer (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2004
Its a pleasure to have such sophisticated and subtle writing on this site!
How does anyone mix erotic writing with Hemmingway? Ok, it's not that explicit, it is subtle but has to be one of the best spanking stories around. I reread Sophias Diary and it was a worthy winner.
Nice writing, please grace us with more? (10/10)

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