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Juicy Lucy's Grand Jete
Author: Estaban Bacca
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(Added on Jun 12, 2004)
(This month 81598 readers) (Total 101993 readers) |
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An aspiring young ballerina follows her dream into the clutches of the evil Dame Vera Mann....more sex than violence in this one ...and will probably be too restrained for some...Men are highly incidental in this story. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Jun 28, 2004 |
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Excellent. This one could certainly complete well with published authors. It's erotic cruelty at its prurient best. Good luck with this one also, EstabanBacca (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2004)
- Before venturing into this vale of violence, I vaccinated myself against the virulent verbiage of reviewers. Still, the sound of a kind word is never amiss. Your perspicacious perceptions are pleasant to one grown all too accustomed to the sniping and snubs of sniggering literary snobs. Thanks to you I shall wade forth through the welter of wooden headed wankers in this world with renewed optimism. Hoping this reply proves that this author is not one of the "lazy buggers". I remain, sincerely yours.
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2004)
- This receptive rascal can’t resist reciprocating to this rather radiant response by such a remarkable recherche, or recapitulating and reiterating that, you have proven positively your panoptic power of communication and comprehension completely and conceivably. Please, pardon me if I have presupposed or pretermitted prematurely. This proves beyond perverted pretence or pondering that...
You, Sir, are no ‘lazy bugger’! :)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 24, 2004 |
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A marvelous beginning to what I hope will be an engrossing tale. Had this been a short story this initial rating, subject to change as the work develops, would have been higher. After two more chapters, it's quite apparent that his story has a stronger than expected erotic punch. This, coupled with the unvarying command of the language the author continues to display, merits a higher rating than what I provided initially. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
- I appreciate your review..E
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| Reviewer:
jth215
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Jun 24, 2004 |
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Getting there slowly. Keep going. Thanks (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to review this story.
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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wonderful story that keeps the reader gripped very well done! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing another of my stories...E
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 14, 2004 |
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very enjoyable (8/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
- Thank you for the review..E
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| Reviewer:
EngineX
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Jun 14, 2004 |
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Interesting theme, nicely set up and well written. I'm enjoying this one. More please! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
- Thank you for reviewing...E
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Jun 13, 2004 |
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YES, YES, YES! For the last forty years I have savored the sadomasochistic undertones of the ballet world and have been waiting for a writer who could explicate it. Congratulations, you have done it catching almost all of the nuances. All too often erotic fiction/fantasy focuses on the homosexual aspects of the male dancers (danseurs) and who can deny that so many of them are gay. But too neglected are the sado-masochistic implications of the agonies that the female dancers go through in reaching even the "corps de ballet'. I love it! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
- Glad you like the theme. Thank you...E
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Jun 13, 2004 |
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I almost did not read this story when isaw it was headlined "M/F", but I thought perhaps the male influence woud be minor! After enthusiastically pouring over every word of this story, and discovering that there actually were NO men involved, I knew then I would have to rate your story the greatest as there are, unfortunately so very few, comparatively, all F/F domination/humiliation stories! What aditionallyglorified your story was the age differences also! PLEASE, keep up the wonderful work the sensuality you are able top transmit through your scenarios, is truly ideal!
Your new avid fan,
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to review this story...E
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