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The Longest Shower
Author: pagan switch
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(Added on Jun 29, 2004)
(This month 49250 readers) (Total 64954 readers) |
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Melanie has finally had enough from her roommate. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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A well told story, the only let down is this type of story has been used so much. However a few ongoing chapters could make this an excellent opening chapter. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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very well done, hope ,more is posted soon (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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May 31, 2008 |
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Very nice story, though it focuses on spanking and whipping, which is not on the top of my favorite BDSM practices. Still, the story is hot and very well written. Would have enjoyed to read what happened after that shower, but since the author has been inactive for 4 years now I don't count on it. (7/10)
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Mabus_ut
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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I like the story, though the plot is a bit generic. College room-mate revenge stories are a little common for my liking, but when treated properly they can be good. I like cliff hangers, but I feel that the story ended a little too abruptly. Other than those minor things, good job. (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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The anticipation got me anticipating a good story. The mindless "WHACK WHACK WHACK" was quite a let-down. After the bondage was done, it seemed the creativity left too, with a lot of story left. (6/10)
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mistresscandy
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Jul 4, 2004 |
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mmm, love it! been planning to do something similair to my own roomie! *grins wickedly..* maybe it'll happen one day.. oh well.. i'll enjoy this for now.. very well written, love it.. want to see total domination in later chapters, keep going :D.. finish it and u'll recieve 10 from me (9/10)
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faust82
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Jun 29, 2004 |
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This story is on the classic "Teaching a lesson" theme, with the initially resisting victim starting to like it in the end. The only thing I have to say that pulls it down is the length. I hope there will be more parts to this story coming soon. (8/10)
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