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Jasmine
Author: Mar989
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(Added on Jul 7, 2004)
(This month 37728 readers) (Total 54627 readers) |
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A beginning between a Dom man and a pretty submissive girl. Written from the Dom's perspective on how to proceed in a new D/s relationship. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
rce
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Dec 10, 2004 |
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Well written and believable, though rather average story line. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
mantis
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Jul 9, 2004 |
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Good believable characterisation. Realistic detail. (8/10)
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