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Growing Up Insane
Author: Jethro Jodhpur
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(Added on Aug 18, 2004)
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The world as seen through the jaded eyes of a young whore. This little trickster has seen it all and then some. Join her and the rest of the ladies in the family as they take it as it cums. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 23, 2004 |
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Not a bad premise, but bouncing over the details (while it makes the story move along) loses readers. They already know all the methods and such, they want you to provide a rich description, heavy on details, and slow it down some. Readers don't want "quickies".
There's promise there. Please keep on posting; looking forward to it! (6/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Aug 23, 2004)
- Thank you for the time you spent reviewing my story, it is appreciated. I'll see what I can do about adding some more local color in future installments. Since you are the only one who has bothered to comment, I question your choice of the word "readers", as well as the observation that the "readers" don't want "quickies". I've got a lot of data that says they do.
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