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A Trial Of Time
Author: littlered
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(Added on Sep 3, 2004)
(This month 54476 readers) (Total 90794 readers) |
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a british spy is caught, exposed and interigated with every evil sadistic meens possible |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
Rating: (5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
Gordi
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May 19, 2008 |
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http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/periods.asp Periods Rule 1. Use a period at the end of a complete sentence that is a statement. Example: I know that you would never break my trust intentionally. Rule 2. If the last word in the sentence ends in a period, do not follow it with another period. Examples: I know that M.D. She is my sister-in-law. Please shop, cook, etc. I will do the laundry. Rule 3. Use the period after an indirect question. Example: He asked where his suitcase was. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
headhunter
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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The story was all right - I agree with Lex Ludite that the birthing section was original - but the grammar and spelling errors kept me from really enjoying it. The story could also use a little more elaboration of the torture scenes. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
kaeiria
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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just didn't grab me (3/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Sep 6, 2004 |
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No argument with the first reviewer concerning the lack of punctuation and terrible spelling. However the birthing section is somewhat original, and for that reason I give it a higher rating. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
littlered
(Edit) (Sep 6, 2004)
- :) i hope thats 'good original and you dont all think im off my loop lol
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Sep 7, 2004)
- Is 7 bigger than 5?
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Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Sep 5, 2004 |
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It's an okay story, but it could have done with some punctuation, and a spelling check. LD (5/10)
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