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Picking and Choosing
Author: Jethro Jodhpur
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(Added on Sep 7, 2004)
(This month 146713 readers) (Total 268437 readers) |
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Poor benighted Peggy, just putty in the hands of a stranger who sees her potential and intends to make the most of it for his own selfish ends. This one has plenty of sex and violence, plus massive amounts of humiliation and degradation. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
scarab
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Mar 21, 2012 |
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Hello sir. I have lurked on this site for a long time, and this story has become one of my favorites. The manic energy and the practical realities of filming extreme torture for mass consumption really give this story a more unique flavor. You do seem to rush through many scenes, though, in your hurry to the next chapter. The willingness of your leading ladies to soak up abuse is intriguing and alluring, if somewhat outlandish.
I have specifically decided to write a review now because you recently decided to add a chapter in which Antionette survives, which I liked and that made me want to see the rest of the story. Thus, I just have to encourage you now, as well as beg for the planned ending if you do not choose to continue this tale. Best wishes. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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:) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Jul 2, 2005)
- Do I feel kind of foolish for not acknowledging your fine rating of my story, you bet I do! Please accept my humble apologies and a promise that it will never happen again unless it happens again.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 5, 2004 |
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As a humiliation story, this one is going strong. Can't say I like the narrator, but hey, it's a story.
Tight story, well-written and moves right along. Good description, some foreshadowing, and a few potential villians waiting in the wings.
Looking for the next installment soon! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2004)
- Thanks for your excellent review of this little story which seems to be growing up before my very eyes. I have to agree that my nameless Svengali is no role model, however beneath his rough exterior beats a heart of solid dross. I hope that future installments of this effort will match up to your most generous rating.
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Sep 10, 2004 |
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All the elements...well-written, literate, vivid descriptions...as well as humiliation and verbal, physical and emotional abuse. All the things I love in a story! I look forward to future chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2004)
- Thank you very much for your most generous review. This one may turn out to be something a little better than average if I can match my words to the outline I've produced. Be on the lookout for more installments in the very near future.
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