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Fate of a Murderess Author: Rebel Snowdrop
(Added on Sep 10, 2004) (This month 101631 readers) (Total 150531 readers)
Jennifer marries into money, but wants out of the family. She learns the hard way that you shouldn't mess with the DeMoeiras - her in-laws have a long history of dealing with errant women. They use all their ingenuity to devise new torments based on the most cruel forms of ancient punishment.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Mar 10, 2009
The author obviously never worked with a blowtorch and has no idea how steel reacts when heated.
The whole concept of the nailing to wood and turning the nails into large rivets afterwards is ludicrous and unfeasable without burning off the victim's hands.
The rest of the story (based on a rather misty murder) is in the same vein: a nice effort, but poorly executed.
JJ (6/10)

Reviewer: mirage (Edit) Rating: Oct 11, 2007
the story is well-detailed but I find it hard to understand all the mechanical torture stuffs. the torture ideas were too long, too technical and hard to imagine visually. A simple ( wrist tied behind back ) alway work because it's easy to imagine in your head then you can go on with the story. (7/10)

Reviewer: OttifantSir (Edit) Rating: Dec 20, 2006
If there had some more hands-on treatment of Jennifer, this story would have been given a 10 by me. It was good reading, and the author made me believe the situation. But, as I said, I would have liked a bit more hands-on. A little more human torture, as opposed to all this mechanical torture.
Still, a great read. (8/10)

Reviewer: balorlv (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2005
Nicely written story. A tad more character development would be good. (7/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Oct 5, 2004
Good premise, well developed. Writing is clear and flows, keeping reader in the story. Creative ideas. Anxious for more. (8/10)

Reviewer: BlackRad!sh (Edit) Rating: Sep 19, 2004
I love it! This story is innovative, detailed, and deliciously sadistic! I can't wait for the next installment! (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 18, 2004
very well done (8/10)

Reviewer: bluebanana (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2004
the story had some nice touches and is a good beginning for a longer story. (6/10)

Reviewer: Dungeonmaster1945 (Edit) Rating: Sep 14, 2004
I cannot wait for another chapert of this (9/10)

Reviewer: tigeress2k4 (Edit) Rating: Sep 12, 2004
A slow starter but has the potential to get very interesting... (6/10)

Reviewer: C_Lakewood (Edit) Rating: Sep 12, 2004
Fairly brutal -- and likely to become more so.
(Not that there's anything necessarily wrong
with that.) It needed some ruthless editing;
the description of the action tends to be too
detailed and should be cut (and the pace picked
up). The other main problem is that the reader
is given no reason to like (or empathize with)
any of the characters. (6/10)

Reviewer: LordVetinari (Edit) Rating: Sep 11, 2004
An intriguing beginning. I am curious to see where this goes next. The writer makes interesting use of magical realism, and looks to be other than the stereotypical bdsm story. (7/10)

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