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Surprise Party Author: Coyote
(Added on Sep 15, 2004) (This month 85626 readers) (Total 128567 readers)
Woman and her 14 year old daughter are kidnapped and taken to a farmhouse by 4 men and 2 young boys for lots of fun and games.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: neededcritic (Edit) Rating: Jul 26, 2016
Story has been removed leaving only the title page and the ads. (1/10)

Reviewer: hfdf (Edit) Rating: Jun 3, 2010
Highly enjoyable. I like the way the author slowly moves from each humiliation to a slightly worse humiliation. The timing is excellent. (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Oct 4, 2004
wow, love the theme, the premise and everything about the story, love mother/daughter stories (9/10)

Reviewer: Nitrofox (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2004
This story is very good. I would rank it up there with "Captured Family". I have but one complaint, and it is a minor one, given the overall quality of the work. I think the childish language is a little overdone. If it were toned down a little, I think the story would be much improved. I am also glad to see an author use proper paragraphing. Good work! (9/10)
Replied by: coyote (Edit) (Sep 16, 2004)
Thanks so much for your rating of Surprise Party. So glad you enjoyed it. As far as the childish language is concerned, I had planned to tone it down as you suggested but many readers seem to enjoy it as it adds to the victims humiliation.

Reviewer: woolfighter (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2004
Coyote I'm glad to see you again. All your work is excellent and this one is no exception. Hoping to read more from you... (10/10)

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