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Darkest Desires
Author: littlered
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(Added on Sep 17, 2004)
(This month 51186 readers) (Total 69190 readers) |
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One mans struggle to come to terms with his most secret thoughts by acting them out. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Losalt
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May 28, 2010 |
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Several surprising twists and turns :-) Highly enjoyable :-) Wish it was longer though.. :-Þ I mean.. What did she do afterwards? Sure the story might be better off without that information but I can't help wondering.. >< (8/10)
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Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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Good story, very sexy. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Good effort. Very interesting. Some very nice touches. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
littlered
(Edit) (Jul 23, 2005)
- hiya big cat!
thanks for taking the time to review my work! im glad you enoyed it,,, hope it did it for you ;) thats why i write
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Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Sep 23, 2004 |
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Very solid. Loss of control and self-destruction is a very real fear for many, and seeing it handled so delicately was very interesting, not to mention highly erotic. Grammar could use a little work, as could an increased vocabulary. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
littlered
(Edit) (Sep 24, 2004)
- im realy glad you enjoyed it, as for rest i figure as im writing it will improve ;) thank god for proof readers hey. at least im getting better, thats the most important thing
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Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Sep 18, 2004 |
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Wow! I was quite blown away by this story. The author demonstrated a deft touch with prose, and managed to give me more than one "I didn't see THAT coming!" moments. Well worth the read. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
littlered
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2004)
- indeed WOw thanks for the wicked rating and praise, yet again i have a big cheshire grin :). I am delighted that you managed to have more than '1' ,,,,,,,, this is what i write for
thanks again lord vetinari littlered
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