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The Dinner
Author: Michael Alexander
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(Added on Sep 25, 2004)
(This month 58312 readers) (Total 79845 readers) |
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Melanie decides to try the new French cafe, discovering that the restaurant caters to specialized desires. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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This scene should have been included in Pixar/Disney's "Ratatouille"...
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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Hard to say much after this rating, it was everything i excepted and more, great concept, great story great everything, hope there is more like this in the future (10/10)
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sunburststrat
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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Very creative. I have to admit I was quite worried that she would end up being dinner. I had a distinct image of her cooked and served on a platter, like with the photographic series "Muki's Kitchen", with stuffed, trussed-up, basted women. The ending was very nice. I'd like to read the dessert story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2004)
- Dear strat0554, I can certainly understand your worries concerning the well being of Melanie. Despite my story "In Their Hands", I have never been a fan of snuff literature. I find it waste of beauty. There is a possibility this story will have a sequel. Dessert would be interesting, but it will be quite a while before I visit this cafe again. So many other things to do and explore. Thank you for the words of appreciation. Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
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Ruby
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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Shocking. Titilating. Delicious.
Well done or done just right depending
on how you like your dinner cooked.
Keep up the great work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
annexintoronto
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Sep 27, 2004 |
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would enjoy this dinner - wish actual dinner developed as well (9/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2004)
- Dear annexintoronto, Your wish was a very difficult decision for me, whether to include the actual dinner or not. In the end I remembered that the story was about the Chef's preparation of Melanie, not what a half dozen men might dip into her during their feasting. I almost ended the story there, but decided that Melanie's reimbursement for her ordeal needed to be voiced, as well as the possibility that she enjoyed the experience. In any event, thank you for your words of appreciation. Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
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Breannefun
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Sep 27, 2004 |
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Can I please have the address of this cafe? I'll make it a point not to have either cash or credit card with me. I liked the ideas. What wonderful delicious things to have happen to her! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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What a great story!!! I laughed through it and just enjoyed the writing. Perhaps you will write more? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2004)
- Do you want another serving of the Dinner, or merely more stories from me? If it is the first, I must apologize that I have no current plans to write a sequel. If it is the second, by all means examine my other works. Yours Faithfully - Michael Alexander
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| Reviewer:
mantis
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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Excellent. Well paced and out of the ordinary. (9/10)
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