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Yahoo Prison
Author: evilman
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(Added on Sep 25, 2004)
(This month 102258 readers) (Total 142198 readers) |
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A Husbands desire to see his wife worked on in unimaginable ways comes true, thanks to Yahoo. |
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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Great start. Just finished chapter three
and I feel like I've been teased beyond belief.
Longer chapters and more action would help.
Looking forward to your next update. (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Oct 17, 2004 |
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After reading the first three chapters, I must admit the author has whetted my appetite for more. My only fear is that he won't be able to deliver on the inhuman suffering he promises. If he does, I think it will warrant a higher rating. (7/10)
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lajo6969
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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Only thing I can recommend is to post more chapters soon so we can enjoy your work... Interesting content, Can imagine her there.... (8/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 27, 2004 |
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Lots of room for moving the plot in different directions; your readers will be anxious to see the next chapter.
Your editing does need some assistance. There are half-sentences, missing words, wrong words. It will improve your score if you take the little extra time to have someone proofread the chapters before you post.
You have an interesting start! Anxious to see what comes next. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 26, 2004 |
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the story idea is great but you need more detail as to what happens to the wife and the chapters need to be longer (7/10)
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mwelling
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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Very good start! Hope to read more soon, and I hope she suffers terribly. (9/10)
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