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The Return of Prodigal
Author: Estaban Bacca
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(Added on Oct 14, 2004)
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A man returns to the village of his birth in the grip of an old obsession. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pippa
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Oct 17, 2004 |
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I wanted to give higher stars for the writing and descriptions. You write well and descriptively. However I couldnt really believe in it.It seemed to end too abruptly and without real continuity. But I did enjoy it as a nice read and I was just disappointed that it didnt "engage" my emotions as I wanted it to. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Oct 16, 2004 |
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Delicious! The traditional wife is just discovering a hidden side of helself. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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This story was light, centering on Maria's humiliation, rather than anything serious sexually. My problem with it was the unbelievability of the plot. Here is the Edgar, with long lost love, treating his dream girl like a whore. He portrayed her husband as a evil brute, yet Maria said he was good to her and she loved him. All this combined makes Edgar look like a prick. A really big one. If I were Maria, I would have stood proud, told Edgar to screw himself with his cane, and boiled grass for my husband and I to eat. (6/10)
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