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A Tale
Author: Teacher
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(Added on Nov 14, 2004)
(This month 50140 readers) (Total 68153 readers) |
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White slavers discover risks they never knew possible in their line of work. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2006 |
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i foundsomething uniquley different to this story and i can not quite pin point it so i will let my rating review stand on it's own mertis, nice job (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
pangent617
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Nov 15, 2004 |
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I would like to give this a higher rating, however, there are some things that need to be looked at. I liked the idea of the turnabout and the revenge, but the use of middle easterns is problimatic it seems just a little to much of a formula and maes the story somewhat melodramatic. I would have thought Americans of any kind or a mixed bag would lend a little more to the story, but enough of that. I like your writing style, not flowery and direst to the point. I look forward to reading more of your writing. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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Liked the writing and the story, just missed too much of the sex. I like more details. Sex in two paragraphs, especially four men taking her orally and anally for the first time was way too short for my tastes. (8/10)
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longrover
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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A very self-possessed heroine in the clutches of a ... villain. Nicely done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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Wow! A BDSM rape capture story with a happy ending! How strange! I loved it! Finally a blonde damsel in distress who does it on her own! Okay, okay, the writing was good too. (9/10)
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