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Celeste Signs Off
Author: The Chairman
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(Added on Nov 23, 2004)
(This month 68028 readers) (Total 96237 readers) |
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Celeste is kidnapped, raped, tortured, and snuffed. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Mar 10, 2007 |
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Although many, including the author, think that this is not such a great story, I found it an enjoyable way to spend a few minutes of my day. Nothing particularly inventive or original, but at least it's not consensual snuff, which I always find a little strange (although The Chairman does it very well). (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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despite what other may say, i enjoyed this story (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind words. I really don't feel it is my best work, but if it was enjoyable to you, then it served a good purpose.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 7, 2004 |
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I'm with Robin Lane on this one. This reads more as a personal jerkoff fantasy than as a coherent story. The cunt numbers are apparently assigned at random, which is reasonable, but why haven't these men been caught? They have an apparently unlimited number of Jane Bondage gadgets, few of which are believable. Basically, re-read Robin's review. And Lex Ludite's Celeste story wasn't any better, but I've given up on reviewing his work. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michelle Byssom
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Nov 26, 2004 |
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Enjoyably grisly. I specially appreciated the knife fuck and the 'fire in the whore' sequence. However, perhaps there was too much torture? Men will have their way I suppose -grins- thank heavens my voice is NOT well trained, that's all I have to say. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Nov 25, 2004 |
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It is good to see that Celeste is still around and live and well. She loves to tempt writers into writing rape fantasies about her. See my story "Rape and Beat the Anchorwoman." A television anchorwoman is captured and punished by a convicted criminal's brother for insulting the family name. For two days she is beaten and raped in her own home. She is forced to submit to the rape of her mouth, pussy and asshole, each time beaten before the rape begins. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 26, 2004)
- She is indeed. I was solicited by this siren a few months ago, but declined with thanks since her fantasy had already been covered by another one of my stories. I believe she must be responsible for perhaps half a dozen stories posted on this site. Too bad The Chairman went way over the top on his version.
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| Reviewer:
pangent617
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Nov 24, 2004 |
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I was not as disappointed as the prior reviewer, but I must agree there was a lack of plot and that did not serve the descriptions well, The intenisity was diluted because there was no reason why this victim was taken after victim 44. there were too manyquestions to make it an enjoyable read. On the positive side, he obviously have a knack for imanginative scenes. I will be looking for more work from this author (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Robin Lane
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Nov 24, 2004 |
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Chairman, my friend, I know you are a much better writer than this. But I have to tell you, I was sadly disappointed with this effort. I could not discern a story at all... just a record of how some sociopathic and violent men brutalized a helpless woman for two days. What was the point? It didn't seem like the events described in this tale had any reason for occurring at all. Celeste was a TV news anchor. So what? The reference had no relation to anything else in the piece except the title. The men were members of a snuff club. Big deal! I've done research for many stories, and I've discovered evidence of Chicago mobsters, and more recently of New York street gangs and Islamist terror cells, all of whome had many times the imagination these men displayed in the way the afflicted a helpless victim with unending and ever-increasing torments. You can see this much on the evening news. I will give a couple of points for your acceptable use of grammar and your immagery, but in all honesty this story (was there a story?) is just not worth reading. It's a blood-drenched waste of time. There is no plot at all, and I've watched Bugs Bunny cartoons with better developed characters. I just couldn't relate to anything that was happening. I couldn't even feel sorry for the victim, and since I couldn't feel anything for anyone or anything in this "story" it was impossible for me to enjoy reading, though I swear I read every word. If you will drop me an e-mail, I will give you some info that will likely help you develope a better story than this. If nothing else, try giving the reader something to care about. If the characters don't care about anything, why should the reader? Readers want to read stories where things happen that intrigue them, with characters they care about in situations they can recognize and relate to. Keep that in mind. You can produce better prose than this. I promise! (2/10)
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