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Auction of Promises
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Dec 29, 2004)
(This month 82533 readers) (Total 102931 readers) |
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When her friend persuaded Jane to change her entry in the company's Charity Auction of Promises from '15 hours housework, no sex'. to 'Slave for 15 hours, no sex' she didn't envisage one of the directors buying much more of her time and demanding more of her body. |
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Sep 20, 2005 |
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Nice story, and very erotic to me. I like it when people are happy at the end. (9/10)
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longrover
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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Very well done once I past Jane's acceptance of Matty's suggestion and David's proposal. (8/10)
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meaxx
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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I am admittedly not an expert in reviewing stories. I simply wished to say the story provided me personally with a lot of real pleasure as well as delightful fantasies of pain. It will certainly become a classic in my masturbatory repertoire. Thank you! (10/10)
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Engineer
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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Basic idea is good, structure and writing in a clean and skilled way. However, there are several implausibilities and incredibilities, and the BDSM part is of a rather standard way, without grip. Erotic is somehow missing all over the story. Without the caning scenes there would be a nice love story left. (6/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 3, 2005 |
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This is a pretty love story, well written and clear. I think the episode with the extreme punishment was very realistic and well done: I have an acquaintance who went through something very similar.
Well paced and mildly erotic, this story keeps the level of quality obohobo stories are known for. Well done. (8/10)
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Ruby
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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Good story that had a begining, middle and satisfying end. Needs a bit of work on the pacing and dialog. Some scenes were very well done. The emotions brought out by receiving the caning and by giving a caning were exceptional. IMHO: The sex scenes were over far too quickly. (7/10)
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