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Latvia
Author: Fargrace
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(Added on Mar 4, 2005)
(This month 55596 readers) (Total 70987 readers) |
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An accident prone women naive in many ways, finds herself a victim in a country that is as unforgiving as it is cold. She is now older and writing in her journal to help her psychiatrist recover from her hard times in life. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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The stories, as they stand, are mildly interesting. The first one in chap. one and two is an old, old tale, with little to recommend it. no fresh twists, not really much of anything. If English is not your native tongue, you may wish to get an English-speaking Editor, if it is your native tongue, you need to doublecheck the work of your spell checker; many words are the wrong ones.
As RedEva said below, the third story isn't bad; an interesting situation, handled very well. Your only concern there is the very end, when she returned to her regular job. It's kind of an anti-climax; she gets fired. So what? Where does she go from there? Is more coming? It needs a stronger finish.
Obviously you have talent here; I look forward to more of your writing. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Fargrace
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2005)
- Thank you. Again, I appreciate you input and your honesty. There is more coming, I hope. I am looking to do more with the doctor/patient routine, but at this moment, I only know what I want for a final conclusion, and I'm not sure how I am going to get her there and I don't want to get there too soon.
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redEva
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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I enjoyed last one most of the 3. It is great “predicament” setup. Almost believable! Good work! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Fargrace
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2005)
- Thank you for you input. I am happy that you enjoyed what Latvia has to offer. I think that if you ever found yourself in Latvia, you might understand your predicament much better now (smile).
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