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The Airline Ad
Author: Mirabile Dectu
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(Added on Mar 8, 2005)
(This month 57914 readers) (Total 80942 readers) |
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What applying for a job can lead to. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mallte
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Very Very enjoyabel (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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Better written than your first story -- good for you! It reads like someone telling a story to someone in that casual, unstructured way we use when we know each other well. Unbfortunately, that style doesn't work well in written form. (5/10)
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rce
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Mar 11, 2005 |
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The story seemed promissing, but I cannot read a story where you're just tossed from one person to another and the dialogue is woven into the text without quotation marks or anything else. (3/10)
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frogs4jerbal
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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very good as i like stories on this type of domination (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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i realy enjoed the story, but the english which apparently is not your native language made reading the story a bit more challanging then i thought (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jens777
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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It's a quite long story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Fargrace
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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I liked the story line and I felt you did a pretty good job of character development concerning that you didn't have a lot of pages to explain everyone. I felt that it was lacking though in two things, first being that it sounds like English isn't your native language and second that even though you went through Gina's thoughts, it didn't really seem like she was thinking. (5/10)
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