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My Awakening Author: Marilyn
(Added on Mar 22, 2005) (This month 50265 readers) (Total 61152 readers)
The story of a girl who teases her boyrfried about kinky fantiasies just trying to get a rise out of him soon discovers that she's hit a sweet spot for him as he quickly embraces one of the fantasies. She is forced to become his and must realize that she is now owned.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: Delaquoi (Edit) Rating: Nov 6, 2005
Really nice. Simple and suspenseful. (8/10)

Reviewer: Sally J (Edit) Rating: Mar 25, 2005
Really fun! Keep going... (8/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Mar 25, 2005
Marilyn, The story was enjoyable. I think you can add chapters to expand how she need to come to grips with with now being owned. (6/10)

Reviewer: anguisette (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2005
it is a promising start, but, as sarah alluded to, the syntax was pretty horrendous. what so many people don't understand is that professionally published works have been edited so they are near-perfect technically for a reason-- the readability means that the story itself can be the main focus, not the grammar. i would love to read more installments, but only if you find a good editor before going on. (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2005
good start, let's see where you go from here (7/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2005
A fine story for a first posting. Yes you could do with a bit of editing and or proof reading but all in all a good read. (7/10)

Reviewer: bisarah (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2005
This story has good promise, the pace was good and it was sexually exciting ... at least to me. But, babe ... you need to learn what constitutes a paragraph! And you had some awkward words--you use "anus" instead of "asshole" for example. (6/10)

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