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The Ruler
Author: Frances LaGatta
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(Added on Apr 1, 2005)
(This month 9978 readers) (Total 17854 readers) |
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Eden followed his instructions to the letter; for any small deviation would be considered disobedience and result in more punishment. Waiting was for her dominant lover was the most difficult and thrilling part. Waiting submissively . . . dressed in nothing but her black bra, silk thigh highs with lacy top bands, and impossibly high, black heels. She knelt on the Oriental rug before the door that would admit him, both anticipating and dreading that particular moment. |
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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An all right story, a tad pretentious in the wording but you can use that to your advantage if you want. The ending was just a little too commercial for my tastes and I really don't have much taste (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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{{{snorting with laughter}} oooppps ... that wasn't "supposed" to be funny! I liked how you used big words correctly and I liked the picture in the beginning, but the story itself was just tired.
Oh, and was she married and that is why he was her illicit lover? (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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While the story/set up is not bad, I kind of see this as a set up to have readers visit the writers web site (5/10)
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