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Willing to be a Mistress
Author: Enclosed Lady
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(Added on May 18, 2005)
(This month 61133 readers) (Total 77082 readers) |
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A submissive teaches a friend how to be a Mistress/Domme, but she don't even imagine her friend will test her new Domme skills on her; the submissive now will learn from her apprentice! |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 12, 2012 |
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Very very nice! (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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Okay excerpt of an adventure, which was probably more satisfying to the author than to the reader. Which is okay, I guess.
The writing is solid though.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 4, 2010 |
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It is a pity to learn that there will not be another part to this story. i was looking forward to reading more about these two people, also was hoping to learn more about their characters.
A good read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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Good plot and action. Most common English mistake - "thick" is distance. "Tick" is a small bug. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Zeferage
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May 30, 2005 |
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I concur that this is a very sexy and enjoyable story. The only thing I feel is missing is more background info of the main characters. Hope the story continues. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mistressjjane
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May 28, 2005 |
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very enjoyable once i got use to the misused words (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
THE Traveller
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May 26, 2005 |
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Very erotic writing. Loved the first person narrative.
The story was very visual, I could see everything as I read it.
Nice mummification and breathplay BDSM.
I enjoyed the inclusion of gagtalk. I also liked the story beginning with her getting chloroformed. (9/10)
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oliveroflondon
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May 23, 2005 |
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A very sexy story. The author's command of language and grammar is much better than many who claim English as their native tongue. Please let us have some more. (9/10)
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mkemse
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May 18, 2005 |
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i hope you plan to add more chapters (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Enclosed Lady
(Edit) (May 24, 2005)
- Thanks very much! Took me a while to write it and I'm glad you liked. About the other story 'Tentacles' I know it wasn't that good, but even so I got some nice emails. This "Willing.." I won't write a 2nd part, but there's another Im writing very 'close' to this one. (Soon). Thanks again!
Best Regards - EL.
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